手把手教你提高雅思写作分数

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基础差的同学(目前只有5分或者更低)永远是注意语法和表达,如果你的目标是6分(特别是你只有一个月的时间)。不建议目标考7分,很多雅思作文老师教书那么多年,都未必考7分。

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先说语法:

只要你的一段话,出现4种错误(1.谓语动词 2.句子结构残缺 3.词性错误 4.名词单复数和不可数名词写复数)超过2次,基本上就是5.5分封顶,一考一个准。

大家可以看看这个学生的段落,作文题目是关于人们要不要做temporary jobs。

On the other hand, people just work for a short time, which means they cannot accumulate experience and acquire some skills. They will not succeed as they cannot gain the accept from their boss. People just doing some simple work means that they do not have much more responsibility. For example, although someone has worked for many different restaurants, he still do not understand how to manage a restaurant. A normal clerk never be a manager if he always changes his workplace.

第三句话出现了句子people doing simple work 充当句子主语的语法错误。然后后面出现了he do主谓不一致,never be a manager,谓语动词不完整的错误

看完这一段,我可以知道这个学生最高就是5.5分的水平。

备考建议:

1. 这些学生建议刚开始不要忙着写作文,写也是错的;

2.踏实花1个星期学习语法,通过100句翻译提升句子结构的例子,通过我的教学材料《语法知识》的改错题来提升句子改错能力。

只有你减少了语法错误,写作文才是6分。

再说表达:

表达就是要用词伙,不要用中国式表达和翻译。

我们看下面这个学生的段落:

Some people tend to take temporary jobs because they can gain an increasing number of time to cultivate their interests which can improve people's talent and potential. It is helpful for personal development.They may be unfamiliar with their talents,abilities and career plans when they commence with the works.For example, some people attend the electronic business courses,so they may find that they have the abilities to run a business.Therefor,they may earn a large number of money and gain more achievements.

这个学生的语法没有太大问题,句子结构基本准确,但是他的分数最高就是6分,因为他有很多比较中式的表达:

an increasing number of time 应该是gain more time

improve talents 应该是develop talents

career plans 应该是career path, or career trajectory

commence with works 应该是enter the workforce, or launch their career

gain achievements应该是achieve greater success

这些文章在中国人眼里看,问题不大,毕竟我们将他的单词翻译成中文,也能看懂,但是问题是考官是外国人,没有中文的背景,就很难理解。

备考建议:

可以选择我的两本书《手把手教你雅思写作》和《手把手教你雅思词伙》来积累基本的词伙,地道表达,也可以看一下外国人写的文章,譬如说前考官Simon的博客,还有BBC,Economist 等文章。

拿到了6分就要看拓展了:

中国学生拓展的常见问题有:

1.跳跃

2.陈词滥调,泛泛而谈

3.重复

4.逻辑不好

我们看下面这个学生的段落, 文章的题目是关于小孩是不是应该在家里和学校经常看电视。

In my view, children can watch TV with the guidance of teachers or parents. they are less likely to show self discipline and long screen time may lead to poor eyesight, which can affect their academic performance. if they are required to watch some documentaries, the knowledge they acquire from television can supplement what they learn at school. as a result, they even can apply their knowledge to practice.

这个同学最大的问题就是:

1. 逻辑不好有跳跃

2. 第二句话说的是小孩不自律,看电视影响视力,最后学习不好

3. 但是第三句突然说到了如果看记录片,可以增加知识,不仅两个句子没有任何联系,而且是一褒一贬,读起来就很没有逻辑

4. 最后一个句子,说“学生可以学以致用”,出现了跳跃,为什么看个纪录片就可以学以致用?难道看个武打片你就成为武林高手?

备考建议:

写文章前可以先写中文思路,再写英文。因为中文是母语,一目了然,你更能看出自己思维的跳跃和逻辑问题。英文是第二语言,有些时候你看自己的文章,觉得字数够了就好了,根本顾不上想逻辑。或者是发现自己逻辑有问题,也没有单词去表达自己的想法。

只有解决了拓展的问题,你才可以获得雅思作文7分。

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